Pulsar013's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spotlights]

At first I thought the intro would be fast - instead it was around 1:30 - also if I understand correctly did u just use hihats instead of kicks? Cuz if u did - bad move, if u did - u def. need to amp it up. Also this is very repetitive - so try and evolve the song a little more. It would really help the song. Because the majority of it is kind of the same.

[Lemon Party?]

Just the name - makes it sound weird - y did u choose it?

OcularNebula responds:

cuz why not

[Lone X - Vindictive]

Well - possibly give this track a bit more energy - and add some transitions - aka sweeps, also fix the ending its abrupt - make it fade out , for cool effect.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the critique!

Peace and love,
Lone X

[Transcend]

Possibly add a lot more reverb - get a real loop- u know add some kicks,claps,cymbals - add some life.

[Mirror.]

Mainly - you need to work on some more melodies - this one is long and repetitive. Also the piece lacks some powerful energy - maybe u should add this in Ambient.

CloudArchitect responds:

You're right, it is unfinished stuff to be honest, should have finished it first. The next thing on the agenda was to shorten the first half to 2 repeats of the verse or find something to fill the second 2 repeats of the verse before the 3 minute mark before you mentioned it. I think the energy depends on how loudly you play it, cheers for your feedback! x

[TN - ID (WIP)]

For now - Im going to say - its really clean dude. But really cant say anything more until the full one is done, except that - great job with the uplifting piano.

[Out of Sight (update3)]

Well this was good..........however.

Intro: Your intro was "ok", would have liked to see some big sweeps, you know some powerful "synth-tros". These things can make your track sound like professional trance, guarantee it. However if you were going for the light trancy feel , then I guess you succeeded - a bit too well.

Synth - IF you want "energy" in your track - best example ( Vol Deeman - Magnetica ) you have to have some "strong" bass synths - these can make a song - or they can break it. I think you should consider increase some db frequency and make it roll a little.

Piano - Usually I will speak about things that need improvement ( I think ) , but for this section I just want to great piano.

Kick - The kick is to the trance piece as the ball is to the game - even though you have it, you need to increase its db power. This def. helps in putting that bouncy feel, into traks - good for clubbin.

Other than that - I think your experiment is working out.