Very nice loop.
Very nice loop.
you said it!
At first I thought the intro would be fast - instead it was around 1:30 - also if I understand correctly did u just use hihats instead of kicks? Cuz if u did - bad move, if u did - u def. need to amp it up. Also this is very repetitive - so try and evolve the song a little more. It would really help the song. Because the majority of it is kind of the same.
Just the name - makes it sound weird - y did u choose it?
cuz why not
Well - possibly give this track a bit more energy - and add some transitions - aka sweeps, also fix the ending its abrupt - make it fade out , for cool effect.
Possibly add a lot more reverb - get a real loop- u know add some kicks,claps,cymbals - add some life.
Mainly - you need to work on some more melodies - this one is long and repetitive. Also the piece lacks some powerful energy - maybe u should add this in Ambient.
You're right, it is unfinished stuff to be honest, should have finished it first. The next thing on the agenda was to shorten the first half to 2 repeats of the verse or find something to fill the second 2 repeats of the verse before the 3 minute mark before you mentioned it. I think the energy depends on how loudly you play it, cheers for your feedback! x
For now - Im going to say - its really clean dude. But really cant say anything more until the full one is done, except that - great job with the uplifting piano.
Resurgam
Age 30, Male
Tennessee, Murfreesboro
Joined on 6/15/09