Pulsar013's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spacelove 2012]

This is for the vocals, however, the instruments could have been a tad bit better. More reverb - especially more reverb. Also a louder kick, with a clap instead of I think a snare.

[WIP]

Instead of giving the away the full melody at the beginning, build it up. Also make your kick harder, add a stronger bass synth. And for your transitions ( remember this is trance ) use more sweeps - up and down. Not just a reversed cymbal crash. ( And if u do add a reversed cymbal crash add some reverb.)

But good melody anyways.

DjScorch responds:

Thanks for the comment! I might look at that if i revisit this song in the future. Plus it also gives me bits of advice for my next stuff so thank you!

-DjScorch

[Never Land]

More of beat box - but still strong. I think it would be nice if u shortened the piano intro, and a new melody with a stronger bass. Also put a long string of kicks with some clean claps.
Another thing - I think it would be better if tried and stretched the ending - unless that was intentional.

BotonyProduktions responds:

Thank you for your review and tips. It's much appreciated!

[Waterwalker]

The Electronic Genre in itself has basic components which chracterize its greatness. One of the unifying instruments of trance is the Kick. The kick was extremely weak, I could not hear it. However if u were to increase the db power it would make a substantial difference. So many newgrounders dont have a strong enough kick - in their songs - its a common problem.

[Borealis - Trance WIP]

Well, this is needing some cymbals and claps ( louder ) i think.

[100 bpm chord loop (wip)]

I wish I could use that loop - for a trance remix. It really sounded great - just wish it was a song - with more instruments.

killerhoofd responds:

stay tuned :) it will be transformed into a song but then it will be 130 bpm

thanks !!

[Light (Original Mix)]

The kick - a little harder than "Sunset", but could you make it harder? That would make this even better. ( I know ive said this twice, but not trying to sound bossy.)

hypernewbie3 responds:

Hey man, thanks for the feedback!

I'll definitely watch out next time, make sure my kick isn't too soft.

[Sunset (Original Mix)]

Very nice - professional and clean - HOWEVER , ur doing progressive right?, that kick - make it harder. It was pretty light, I think it needs more db power. Around 4:00 that stretch needed a harder kick string.

[-A World Beyond-]

Its called - great minds think alike - in some senses. So far, this is only one of several pieces that I have heard so far that sound like prof. trance. Buen Trabajo. ( But of course dont think I am trying to condescend u or anything.