Yet again - someone tell me - is drum and bass somehow becoming trance? - The mixing was pretty good, but there were some things I would like to call attention to.
1. With ur ability I would highly suggest progressive trance techniques - essentially what im getting at is you need to evolve the song a little more. THIS HELPS tremendously when you dont want to be too repetitive. The main thing is - THE whole song for the most part - sounded like the full lead - except for some parts.
Begin with lead by giving just a little of the melody and THEN with the pad break follow up with the rest of the melody ( A trick all the pro producers use - Kandi, Armin, MORPH, Deeman etc. )
Also remember to let the break off with some release of electroment use. U know the way u started out the song? PERFECT for a pad break climax - PERFECT - but not soo much for a full on intro sound.
2. Also - this piece was really drum and bassy - Im thinking maybe it would be better to add a loop of kicks, u know kick = clap = HH, making for a real trancy feeling.
how it plays out - try and use the progressive technique - ull excel at it - while making longer tracks.
3. The length is also a a bit short - but because of the way u organized the song - thats usually
That about sums it up - for a remix this was awesome mixing - very nice utilization of the plucks, and the piano. And that was a clever pluck rhythm holder at 3:06. Overall - great job - man.
Remember these are un-biased and sincere suggestions - not tryin to be too bossy.