Pulsar013's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Focus Fire: Works]

This is kinda like techno - if its going to be "trancy" then heres the stuff its going to need (my feedback)
1. Fix the ntro - it sounds like a gun - use a cymbal crash - or a down sweep.
2. Increase the db strength -
3. Ur instruments need some reverb
4. Above all the song just sounds like its techno - so I would suggest beginning the piece with a string of kicks - and a stronger bass - preferably a strong synth.

Berkebus responds:

If it sounds like techno, i'll let it be techno.
Oh, and... you might notice that the intro sound is the sound of a fireworks arrow blasting apart, so it's kind of intentional.

[Forever ~DJ Astromii]

Well - well. Nice melody. However, needs some work.
1. Change the clap pronto - make it sound "sweeshy"
2. fix the kick - it sounds a bit alone -add some db strength.
3. Enhance your transitions - you know instead of just a double kick, add a sweep.
4. And pretty much organize it a bit better - end the song like a progressive track.

[Calamity Love (Original Mix)]

Its missing something - but I just cant tel yet.

[clockwork :: EX-EVO]

This seems to me - like its not trance. I would add some string of clubby kiks possibly, and some louder claps. Make the track "crowded", you know like proggresive tracks.

MisterMonroe responds:

then that would remove what I was getting at in this song. Sorry, but adding those things would kind of kill its mellow-side. My mistake- it was either tagging it as trance or ambient. Wasn't sure which one would fit more.

Thanks for the comment either way! I just don't see those things fitting for this version of the song, however.

[Target on the Center(WIN)]

Its really weak - "wake" it up - make it lengthy and increase the number of instruments - and change it this to techno - instead of trance.

[Chimerical]

Could you clean up the sound a bit? And also organize it a little better - just suggesting.

[RHF (Original Mix)]

The intro is the best part - however - theres a problem ( a problem i have too ) repetitiveness - and your kick gets kinda drowned in the instruments - may be increase its decibel strength. Good light feel though.

Xeallexx responds:

I figured as much. Thanks for your input.
PM me anytime you wanna collab. I am always willing to learn and help out.

[Ballin' In D Major]

NO!!! - u just took Pachelbel's nearly 400 year old work and made it into techno (misc). The sinews I am not so amazed by - Luckily I actually like this piece, I commend you for taking the time to do this.