Pulsar013's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beautiful Somber]

Reverb - fpr tht piano.

StaticLF responds:

I'm going to go ahead and think that you are saying more re-verb, but I'm not entirely sure.
Thanks.

[~TC~ Incarnate (WiP)]

Very nice loop.

Cahzmana responds:

you said it!

[Lemon Party?]

Just the name - makes it sound weird - y did u choose it?

OcularNebula responds:

cuz why not

[Lone X - Vindictive]

Well - possibly give this track a bit more energy - and add some transitions - aka sweeps, also fix the ending its abrupt - make it fade out , for cool effect.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the critique!

Peace and love,
Lone X

[ClayfacerNot official rmx]

When in doubt - use Dance

Nefix responds:

Agreed. xD

[Mirror.]

Mainly - you need to work on some more melodies - this one is long and repetitive. Also the piece lacks some powerful energy - maybe u should add this in Ambient.

CloudArchitect responds:

You're right, it is unfinished stuff to be honest, should have finished it first. The next thing on the agenda was to shorten the first half to 2 repeats of the verse or find something to fill the second 2 repeats of the verse before the 3 minute mark before you mentioned it. I think the energy depends on how loudly you play it, cheers for your feedback! x

[EzMa - Anabio]

Well - theres not much I can say except - this is more dancy than anything.

eimad-zamrik responds:

Ya it is!
Thanks for enjoying!

[Infect]

This is is a very nice piece I must say.

Melody - The melody itself was quite uplifting, however it was still a tad bit repetitive.My suggestion would be to try and give a little of the melody away at the beginning, and then after your climax and the rest ( its a method used by the pro's ), it helps to build tension in your song.

Transitions - While I was not too amazed by your transitions, they were suffice. I would suggest adding, sweeps - I use them alot - they help trance pieces really build nice climaxes. You know the really powerful "swoosh" sounds you hear in progressive trance pieces? Also try and add a kick roll, these are pretty much mandatory in a trance song - they really increase tension - and their release is great.

Instruments - I see you used some variety of instruments - very nice piano set - , however I think it would have been better if you used some more than you did. Not saying that you have too, just that for a piece like this you might want to do that. Its still good with a few.

Mastering - I feel like your kick was below your major sounds, maybe if you could bring it closer to the db level of the rest of your instruments, would help. It just sounded a bit "fuzzy".

For now thats about it, I hope my suggestions will help.

blizter responds:

Thank you for those reviews, it's really helpful!

[Dj Alda - The Beginning]

Here - I see some things that stick out.
1. Weak transitions - easy to fix - just get some sweeps in there.
2.I see ur also missing some hats.
3. Try and get a better clap - I know its just preference.
4. Make a more solid pad.
5. The track itself - is lacking some depth to it - it needs a little more pizzaz.
6. Finally - your ending was a little abrupt - make it more layered.

DjAlda responds:

It is the first song but I'll try to fix some bugs xD
thx

[Casa de la Luna]

Melody is nice - but the pad intro is a bit lengthy. Im seeing a pattern here - this is also very light.

wulfsok responds:

Easy listening.. This series is more of a chill-out and trip out album set than a dance set. You gave me an idea though. Keep an eye for more releases.

This track is the opener to said album set, hence the lengthy intro =).