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Pulsar013

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Very nice loop.

Cahzmana responds:

you said it!

Very nice - its clean - however some more reverb would be nice.

At first I thought the intro would be fast - instead it was around 1:30 - also if I understand correctly did u just use hihats instead of kicks? Cuz if u did - bad move, if u did - u def. need to amp it up. Also this is very repetitive - so try and evolve the song a little more. It would really help the song. Because the majority of it is kind of the same.

Its missing a few things - but I know (because of that melody) it will be bangin once its done.
Please finish this dude - add some cymbals - divide the song by intro, lead, break, climax, and release. If u think u have questions dont hesitate to ask - "not trying to act like - Im holier than thou".

Just the name - makes it sound weird - y did u choose it?

OcularNebula responds:

cuz why not

Well - possibly give this track a bit more energy - and add some transitions - aka sweeps, also fix the ending its abrupt - make it fade out , for cool effect.

Lone-X responds:

Thanks for the critique!

Peace and love,
Lone X

When in doubt - use Dance

Nefix responds:

Agreed. xD

Possibly add a lot more reverb - get a real loop- u know add some kicks,claps,cymbals - add some life.

Mainly - you need to work on some more melodies - this one is long and repetitive. Also the piece lacks some powerful energy - maybe u should add this in Ambient.

CloudArchitect responds:

You're right, it is unfinished stuff to be honest, should have finished it first. The next thing on the agenda was to shorten the first half to 2 repeats of the verse or find something to fill the second 2 repeats of the verse before the 3 minute mark before you mentioned it. I think the energy depends on how loudly you play it, cheers for your feedback! x

For now - Im going to say - its really clean dude. But really cant say anything more until the full one is done, except that - great job with the uplifting piano.

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