Pulsar013's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Focus Fire: Urban Lights]

Its nice - but its missing something. Its not crowded enough. Maybe you should take this to the House section. Could you possibly lower the db strength of that hat.

Berkebus responds:

The hat is really something I wish I could still change, but I lost my save file after at the worst moment suddenly the power went down. Not kidding.

[Focus Fire: Works]

This is kinda like techno - if its going to be "trancy" then heres the stuff its going to need (my feedback)
1. Fix the ntro - it sounds like a gun - use a cymbal crash - or a down sweep.
2. Increase the db strength -
3. Ur instruments need some reverb
4. Above all the song just sounds like its techno - so I would suggest beginning the piece with a string of kicks - and a stronger bass - preferably a strong synth.

Berkebus responds:

If it sounds like techno, i'll let it be techno.
Oh, and... you might notice that the intro sound is the sound of a fireworks arrow blasting apart, so it's kind of intentional.

[Forever ~DJ Astromii]

Well - well. Nice melody. However, needs some work.
1. Change the clap pronto - make it sound "sweeshy"
2. fix the kick - it sounds a bit alone -add some db strength.
3. Enhance your transitions - you know instead of just a double kick, add a sweep.
4. And pretty much organize it a bit better - end the song like a progressive track.

[Calamity Love (Original Mix)]

Its missing something - but I just cant tel yet.

[clockwork :: EX-EVO]

This seems to me - like its not trance. I would add some string of clubby kiks possibly, and some louder claps. Make the track "crowded", you know like proggresive tracks.

MisterMonroe responds:

then that would remove what I was getting at in this song. Sorry, but adding those things would kind of kill its mellow-side. My mistake- it was either tagging it as trance or ambient. Wasn't sure which one would fit more.

Thanks for the comment either way! I just don't see those things fitting for this version of the song, however.

[Heart of Courage]

I been listening to some of your stuff and Im seeing something - your good with pads - however I ve noticed a little repetitiveness with your bass (synth) at the intro . Could you possibly change it to another type - thats pretty much it.

[Trancen der Grave]

Im not trying to be rough or anything but - its really "choppy" - try and use progressive techniques. Increase the power of the KICK as well as the other instruments. And since this is supposed to be trance , I would advise using reverb ,cymbals and sweeps.

Tremulos responds:

The choppiness is definitely as you say; it was actually kind of intentional, but also a result of my poor transition writing. I find it difficult to write progressively like you said. The kick could use some more power, but adding elements just because "it's supposed to be trance" is a horrible idea imo. This isn't supposed to be trance, it's supposed to be a song that I wrote. It just fit best in trance.

Thanks for the review.

[Target on the Center(WIN)]

Its really weak - "wake" it up - make it lengthy and increase the number of instruments - and change it this to techno - instead of trance.

[Moons Glory]

It was interesting at first - however later on it just got a bit muddy - clean up your kick - and organize the song a little more - possibly EQ the instruments - their kinda fuzzy. And that guys voice is a bit detrimental to the sound.

[Chimerical]

Could you clean up the sound a bit? And also organize it a little better - just suggesting.